Proof reading for a PD article
Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2017 6:35 am
Hey all,
I mentioned in an earlier thread (the one for the 2016 Halloween issue) that I had started working on The Dark Conspiracy Traveller's Guide to Australia and also that I may ask someone to read over my notes to see if the concepts I'm trying to convey are getting delivered to the reader.
I have a few paragraphs regarding the size & population density of Australia that I'd like someone who's not Australian to read to see if they make sense and are actually cohesive enough to convey the vastness and emptiness of the continent to the reader.
The paragraphs make sense to me but ya'know, I wrote them so yeah, it's no surprise that I understand what I mean!
Is anyone interested in doing a small bit of critiquing? Leave a note here or PM me and I'll send the relevant sections via PM for you to read & critique.
I mentioned in an earlier thread (the one for the 2016 Halloween issue) that I had started working on The Dark Conspiracy Traveller's Guide to Australia and also that I may ask someone to read over my notes to see if the concepts I'm trying to convey are getting delivered to the reader.
I have a few paragraphs regarding the size & population density of Australia that I'd like someone who's not Australian to read to see if they make sense and are actually cohesive enough to convey the vastness and emptiness of the continent to the reader.
The paragraphs make sense to me but ya'know, I wrote them so yeah, it's no surprise that I understand what I mean!
Is anyone interested in doing a small bit of critiquing? Leave a note here or PM me and I'll send the relevant sections via PM for you to read & critique.